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Set From Today

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mudanoman Says:
March 1st, 2006 at 12:06 pm
Excellent captures. My rather nit-picky critique as I enjoyed the set.

Picture #1: Love the color saturation of the green leaf, but it leaves much to be desired (We want to see more leaf, maybe to a Rule of Thirds). Also the water droplet could be a little bit more defined because at first look its hard to see what exactly is it.

Picture #2: Excellent timing. The clone tool would be helpful in removing the top left branches and also the white building in the background. Also the dog is somewhat hidden by the bushes behind it (it would be a night and day difference if the bush was not behind the dog). Very interesting photo nonetheless.

Picture #3: Shot would have benefited with a second flash to the right of the camera to bring texture to the brick wall as well as reduce the shadows.

Picture #4: Photo could have benefited from a tighter crop. I am not sure if I would fiddle with the color balance as well.

Picture #5: Interesting idea, but not much I can say about the subject, a tree stump. Seems like a rembrandt style lighting. However, lighting a bush that way does not work as well as it does on a face.

Picture #6: Very pleasant photo. A mist of water at the time of capture could have helped bring out the elements more.

Just my .02. Best, Ivan
mudanoman Says:
March 1st, 2006 at 1:00 pm
Picture #7: I like the yellowish color of the tree and how its backed by the solid black sky. It really adds detail to the tree.

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